Writing Term 1 2016

My Holiday Recounts 2016

Wednesday 3 Feb

On a lovely holiday. I woke up and went to the shower to have a nice bath and after that I went to the bathroom and wash my face and brush my teeth clean and after that I went to my bedroom and put on my clothes before I go to Southern Cross College to do booking and after that I went to the kitchen and eat and drink tea and eat crackers for the morning tea and after I drink and eat crackers for my tea I went to the sitting room and watch the morning news before I go. So when I was finished watching my morning news I went outside and went to the car to get ready to go to Southern Cross College and when I finally made it their i got out of the car and run to my booking training and I finished doing my booking training we went to the movie to watch Straight Outta Compton and we came from my existing holiday I came home went to the shower and make myself dury and eat my dinner and went to sleep for School in the next day.

My Mum and Dad came with me

My Narrative Structure

Structure of Narrative Story

ORIENTATION - Where did it took place: When did it happened:  Who is ?in the story Where - Tonga When - Chief House   Who - Ma‘afu & Brother & Muihātafa, & Ma'afu Lele

COMPLICATION - What is the problem? The Brothers Didn’t Listen to thee oldest What He Have to them to Do and The two Brothers Didn’t listen because they were checked. and the chief told them stop stop and the brothers didn’t listen

SEQUENCE OF EVENT - Plot -  What happened in sequence?  You can bullet point the main events. The Two Sons Didn’t listen To The Dad Morning Time Lunch Time Afternoon Night Time

RESOLUTION - How was the problem solved? The Chief Solved the problem. And The Chief Stop Charting.

CONCLUSION: After all the of their work  they have did everything went well.

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Narrative Writing

Thursday 11 Feb

Use the following guide to help you:- what is happening?

A crocodile is trying to get on the boat.

 what are they doing?

The man is trying to get the crocodile off the boat

where are they?

In the middle of the sea.

who are they?

A man and a crocodile

and describe the things you see.

The man is standing up in the boat trying to get rid of the crocodile.

What might go wrong in this picture?

The boat could tip over.

How might that situation be solved?

The man needs to start the motor.

Who will  help?

The man has to help himself.

Writing Term 1 2016

Tuesday 9 February 2016

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Tuesday 8 February’ 2016 On Monday Yesterday i woke up and went for a shower on 7:00am before We go to My Friend's house and When i finished Showed i came out and went to the bathroom tub and Turn it on and start washing my face and brushing my teeth and when i finally went for a shower and washing my face and brushing my teeth

Then i crap my towel and dry myself i went to My Bedroom and put on some clothes and put on my socks and put on my shoes on and When i finished Putting on some clothes and putting on my socks and putting on my shoes then i went to the kitchen drink My Tea and eating my crackers

and someone from My Church member’s came to my House and knock and knock on My house and so my Dad open the door and they say that i and my brother have to go to okahu bay to have a swim and then i crap my bag and crap my swimming clothes and went off to pick another Church Member up and get going to okahu bay to have a swim in the hot day

and i had exciting day at the beach at okahu and.

Bloging 2016

Greeting 2016

Kia ora,  malo e lelei and Welcome back to another year of learning. I am in Room 7 and I am 12 years of Age and I am a year 8 Student at St Pius X Catholic School. I am looking forward to my Learning this year. When I finish intermediate i’ll be going to Glendowie College.

Frist day at School

On frist day at school It waas so allsome because i had a new teacher mrs Tui and mrs Deeney But i Made new firend's On the frist day Mrs Cocerly Read out of the names of chilldren and kid's to their new classrooom and When I came back in my Very Frist day and i had so fun in the frist daay in the school